Faith Based Organizations Paragraph on the new Wikipedia Site

Hi, Dale. Thanks for adding this section!

Could you change this sentence:

The founder of this ministry was [motivatedhttp://acestoohigh.com/2012/03/13/ex-pastor-marries-science-bible-studies-to-heal-wounds-of-childhood-trauma/ motivated] to create a Bible study for Small groups.

 

....to read: The founder of this ministry combined the epidemiology of ACEs, the neurobiology of toxic stress and the Bible into a workbook and 12-week course that's being used by clergy in several states.

 

And could you fix the link?

 

Thanks!!

 

Cheers, Jane

Hi Jane,

I'm happy to do that. I like your sentence better - a little more clinical.

See the changes here - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/..._Based_Organizations

Be well,

Dale

Thanks for making the changes, Dale. It's so great that you're a Wikipedia author.

Can you add the link in that sentence? -- http://acestoohigh.com/2012/03...of-childhood-trauma/

And the sentence after it, I think it's supposed to be faith-based instead of faith abased.

Cheers, J.

 

Jane,

That article should probably be listed as a Reference, correct? I have not added a reference before. Could I get some help with that one?


Dale

Yes, I'll ask Joanna to fix that.

Thanks!

I posted an ADDENDUM to the "Adverse Childhood Experiences Study" Wikipedia article, near the bottom of the page, but above the list of cited references. I regret I am not an "author" who had "created an [Wikipedia] account" beforehand....(Perhaps I'll create an account soon, just in case supplementary information "seems fitting". Thank You Dale, for this.

HI Robert,

 

Thanks for your note.  I do not see any addendum on the Wiki page.